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The Silent Helper: Creepypasta

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It was an average 6th grade school day. Teacher was lecturing, kids were bored. everything was normal, but it didn't last. Suddenly, the room got noticeably colder, and very faint music could be heard. It sounded like a high-pitched music box, but other than that. everything was silent, as if though everyone was holding bated breath. The teacher stopped his lecture, then looked to the door. A look crossed his face, a look of fear, for a girl had entered. No one had heard her come in, nor the door open, she just appeared. She looked normal enough, maybe 13 or 14, with dirty blond hair, she wore average clothes, but with bangs covering her eyes.

The teacher broke the cold silence. "I'm fine.", He said in a shaky tone. The girl's head lowered slightly, as if nodding, then, the teacher went back to talking. Everyone looked at the teacher, then back at the door. She was gone and the room became warmer again. Again, no one heard her leave, even with the silence. That was that, and everyone went home with no sleep. Either from nightmares or curiosity.

The same thing happened every day to all eight classrooms, and everything was the same, except the teacher would say something different, like "No thank you" or "I'm OK", but all they're basically saying the same thing, get out. They all had the same look each time, terror. Even though everyone of them said "I'm fine", sometimes they were lying. One time, five minutes after she left, the teacher asked one of the students to go up to the office and copy some papers. Even though her presence scared everyone, no one had a problem with her. She comes, she goes, everything always goes fine...

It was 1:44, one minute from the time she was supposed to come. The teacher had gone to do something in the office, so he left the students with a worksheet to work on while he was gone. Everyone had started talking with each other, when the clock hits 1:45. The girl was expected to come, and some people even looked at the door, but she wasn't there, so they back to their conversations. No one had noticed it, but she had come, but she was at the front of the class. A wicked smile crossed her face.

In the courtyard, everything was quiet. Muffling could be heard from classroom R5, but that was it. Everything was peaceful. The door to R5 suddenly opened, and noise exploded for the room. Blood curdling cries pierced through the air like a razor. Yells, screams, calls for help came bursting through the door. The room itself was a horrible sight. Blood stained walls, more kids that looked dead, it could make anyone vomit. 

A boy with brown hair tried to get through. From the front, it looked as though he was a being sucked in. With all of his strength, he pulled, but he was quickly pulled back into the room, the door closing behind him. Once again, silence swept through the courtyard, with muffles still coming from the room.

A few seconds passed, then the muffling stopped. The door opened again, but no noise came out, instead, the girl walked out. She opened the door, then closed it behind her. She walked down the ramp, then walked over to the next classroom, on to her next victim.

So, I figured, if I'm going to be a true creepypasta fan, might as well actually write one, right? Well, I actually have inspiration for this one. SO here it is:

I am an aid for 6th graders, and I come in everyday to help the teachers out. One day' I was at youth group (hey, you still don't know what age I am, some adults work there and high schoolers go there.), and I was in the church, telling everyone about your weeks ups and downs, and we finished early, so we decided to go back to the main area. The group of 6th grade boys were still talking in the main area. I was the first one to enter. When they saw me, one of them sarcastically said. "Ah, a ghost." I try not to smile, then I said. "Totally ligitly a ghost here." The another one chimes in. "Yea, you are. You always come into my class during core 2" I paused, then looked up and nodded, because it was true. Then I thought of this weird idea.

so, there you go. You probably skipped that whole thing just to get to the point, well, for those people,  GO BACK AND READ IT'!!!!!!! I thought long and hard about what to day about that story, So BACK. UP. AND READ IT!!!! 

*clears throat* * sigh* ok! I've already started to draw the picture of her.
EDIT: I finished the drawings, if you didn't already know.

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darkmedolie's avatar
this creepy is so cool !!!!!